The Cranky Ol' Bat

Life is a banquet and most poor suckers are starving to death! - RuPaul

2005-06-10

I Got a Thesaurus, and I Ain't Afraid to Use it!

This article has some pretty good stuff in it about diving.

The first two paragraphs, however, are classics of overdone prose. Check it out for yourself!

3 Comments:

  • At 5:20 PM, Blogger DragonStormInAZ said…

    Ummmmm.... on msn.wine.com?
    I thought you were not supposed to drink and scuba? :D

     
  • At 10:45 AM, Blogger Kory O said…

    Quite right, my newbie diving friend!

    I was amazed to see it there, myself. Based on the writing, I think they slammed a few bottles of "Two Buck Chuck" (my favorite cooking wine, btw) before composing this piece.

     
  • At 5:07 PM, Blogger Scone said…

    They could have used a bit more time with their thesaurus. Unevenly pretentious prose is pathetic. {smmmmack!}

     

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